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◆可以指点
◇但请不要指指点点
★老师要求800+
☆实际只有600+
❥评级:乙+
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《春》
作者:宋代霖
日期:2023年3月12日
寒冬辞去,春风唤醒了沉睡的大地,明媚的春光唤醒的沉睡的花草。一周的时光在我的指间悄无声息的溜走了,却并没有留下丝毫痕迹。
早晨下楼时猛然发现院子里的白玉兰开了。
阳春三月,微风拂过那盛开在深棕色枝丫堆里的白玉兰,没有格格不入,反倒是有了一些锦上添花的感觉。朵朵白玉兰绽放在其间,这儿一朵,那儿一簇,没有一丝规则的盛开着。花瓣很薄,好像吹过就会掉落一样。春风吹来,香气环绕在身边,淡而无味,甜而不腻,花瓣随风飘落。
这才使我意识到原来春天已经到了啊!
春天的风轻柔而不失温和,给人一种舒服的感觉,春风拂过,光秃秀的枝干已经恢复生机,土地又重回绿色。
春意正浓,春色正好。路上的行人正在接受阳光的洗礼。阳光照在白玉兰上,透过树枝,白玉兰仿佛在发光一般。
春天的光暖暖的 而又不失美丽,给人一种温暖的感觉,春光照来,给绿油油的草地又增加了一些美感,绿意在阳光中更浓了。
春天真的来了,它携着风和光一起来了,给这个世界增加了风采。
春天仿佛爱美的姑娘,打扮着这个世界。它让光照在迎春花上,迎春花顿时黄了。它让风吹过蒲公英,蒲公英顿时飞起了。
春天仿佛一个好奇的孩子,对这个未知的世界充满疑惑。于是它随着风儿在这里摸摸,那里摸摸。于是它随着光儿这里照照,那里照照,
寒冬已辞去,春天又归来。
字数:600+
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宋代霖下面一句是老师留下的评语
迎接春天,也迎接属于自己的春天
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